welcome to my life I’m a white gentle octopus I love playing my piano all though all the keys come springing off . I’ve got 2 kids Tanya and tiffany I make them hunt down the keys to fix my piano ”FIXERS FIX MY PIANO” yes dad they say all right back to my life I drink sea slugs so do Tanya and tiffany they go to school at octopie planet school I drop them off then I go grocery shopping sea slugs are at the top of the list as well as fish tails and that’s my life as a octopus
Hello Alivia,
What a creative story of a gentle octopus and family. Well done.
One hint for improvement, remember to check your story before publishing. There were some places where a new sentence might have been taken.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia