huge is gone

once I owned a swan ,

its name was huge because huge, was huge. we rode a scooter together One day long ago i went too the zoo with huge. when we walked in the didn’t notice huge. at the zoo we had so much fun we saw hippo, meerkats, elephants, fish, and another swan it was the best huge and the other swan talked but they looked identical when we left the workers took her away cause they thought we stole the other swan when we didn’t now the only way i can see huge is if we were careful and sneak in the zoo

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  1. Hello Alivia,
    Your wonderful story about your swan named Huge and a visit to the zoo was interesting to read. It was sad to see the zoo thought Huge was their swan.
    One tip: Remember to look where new sentences might be taken.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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